Jay-Berry's Reviews

[~my portfolio~]

Very well animated, but pointless

Very well animated, but pointless.

baksteen93 responds:

a portfolio; a compilation of an artists work, mostly pointless

[BRETHREN]

NOISY

Of you replay it plays the credit music over the movie, stopAllSounds :D

[Altamat3 Madn3zz Pwnadg3!]

Hmm.

I know that you were trying to make this bad,as a spoof of actual bad versions of madness (or at least I think that you were). But taking the piss out of bad things only works if the audience knows that the animator is much better than that and if the animation is done well, but portrayed badly. If you understand.

So, sorry but, try again.

kanamomashouse responds:

if your trying to say i made this shitty on purpose, then yes, i did.

[The Invisible Trousers]

IT R GUD

LOL I MAID A LEVUL!!!1!!!ONE!!!!

[2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2], [2, 12, 13, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 9, 2, 2, 2, 2, 17, 2, 2, 2, 2], [2, 1, 4, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 18, 2, 12, 1, 1, 1, 13, 2, 2], [2, 1, 4, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 18, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2], [2, 1, 1, 11, 19, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2], [2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 16, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 18, 2], [2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 16, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 18, 2], [2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 10, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2], [2, 11, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 14, 2, 15, 15, 15, 15, 15, 2, 2], [2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 5.08]

[String evade]

Not too bad.

The graphics are bad, the length is bad, the idea is unoriginal. But I still enjoyed it.

Grab a preloader from the submit content page of Newgrounds though, mate.

[Cloud Control]

Not a bad idea

...but I found it horribly slow paced.

I usually enjoy puzzle games but this just moved too slowly for me.

[Running From A Rapist]

Not Quite.

You clearly have a bit of talent, but you need to learn how to mix down a song properly, you were probably wanting to have a lot of bass, but that means turn everything else down, or mess about with the EQ a bit, it seems like you've just turned the bass channel up way high.
Also, rape isn't funny, I wouldn't use it as a recurring theme in your song titles.

hybrax responds:

Played with the EQ a lot and found blurred the lower pitched snares and toms way to much. I know you can do this also with a vocoder coupled with re-verb but I'm still a bit sketch on vocoders.

Also, If 9/10 people enjoy gang rape and we live in a democracy why isn't it legal?
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[Limbo 316]

Yes!

I'm in a bit of a hurry, but I just wanted to tell you that this is incredible.
Great job.

Shellac responds:

Thank you buddy! Pleased to meet you. I'll check out some of your stuff in a bit...

[Endure (Ambient)]

Very Nice

Reflective and relaxing, everything that a good Ambient song is..